Shonen Jump Kon version

Okay I think my first one was WAAAAAY better.
Whatever.
I wanted to do a close up of Kon, so thats why he's standind like that. Diandra wanted me to do a D. Gray-man addition (Because all the main pics will be Bleach because I'm like, obsessed) So I drew Timcanpy!! I was going to draw Allen but...
I also (if you can see them... I didn't have the right colour) drew the Millenium Puzzle and the Millenium Ring. Not as much panache in this one. Whatever. It's still awsome.
(c) Kon (c) Bleach Tite Kubo-sensei
(c) Timcanpy (D. gray-man Katsura Hoshino-sensei
(c) Millenium Puzzle and Ring (c) Yu-gi-oh Kazuki Takahashi-sensei

I also want a CRITIQUE for this one. I'm just poor and can't buy a subscription just yet^^